Hope you are feeling better this week but glad you got to tune in to class.
For both your topics I’d like to see a bit more about how they relate to are are signs of the dark state of the Internet- they definitely provide a venue for looking at internet culture. How does one know or determine the amount of their presence is performed? It seems totally subjective and there is more than enough things written about decreasing one’s time spent, also https://qz.com/1229311/digital-detoxing-is-the-tech-equivalent-of-a-juice-cleanse-and-neither-of-them-work/
I see a tad more potential in the second (though I’m fuzzy on what it is), there seems good room to investigate but think it needs a bit more as a guide than improving the definition.
Whichever one you pick make there there are clear steps/ actions a reader can do