VIII. One-Star-Reviews

Yes, I can’t believe it either: this is my final blog post for this class. My time in Bergen has flown by – nostalgia, here I come! But first, let’s take on one more topic. This week’s E-Lit brings me into a forum I have managed to avoid so far: Reddit. It is a whole new world that opens up the depths of the internet – but doesn’t that make it perfect for a netprov? Okay then, sign me up, I guess… Having never navigated the site, I did not find everything as obvious at first. The thing I struggled with the most was that I did not understand at first whether this was the only place to post, or whether the actual netproving would take place on the product sites themselves. But once I had a basic understanding, I did find some very funny reviews. So, I left my own review to this great product in the role of Dolly Fletcher, a middle-aged gadget lover with 2 kids:

“I love gadgets. Everything that makes my life a little easier is very welcome in my house. So, when I stumbled upon this little helper here, naturally I had to have it! I must say that I was not sure at first what to make of this amazing product – is it for cheese? For butter? For very buttery cheese? But now I can assure you – it is everything your heart desires. With one firm grip you can slice up whatever you can fit in there (being a little engineer myself, I had a lot of fun with bananas, very soft bread in small quantities and even soap). And the description does not lie – you really can cut an entire stick of butter in less than one minute! In fact, with a little practice I managed in only 43 seconds. Try that with an ordinary butter knife! All in all, this is a nice addition for my kitchen. Thumbs up!”

I feel like the basic idea of this netprov is great – it just might lack the right forum. The fact that it is based on reddit removes the illusion and makes it a sort of inside-joke among experienced netprovers. However, I should still put a disclaimer here: I might just have missed the point! Some of the interactions under the reviews make it clear that there are some very witty people behind the posts. I will keep an eye on how this develops.

Now, a few words on my personal E-Lit project. As always, I keep running into the same problem here: in my mind, everything works out perfectly – on my screen however, everything is a mess. Over the weekend, I have tried my luck with wordpress, but I must admit that I find it rather difficult. Finally, I got so frustrated that i went back to hand-coding everything with HTML and CSS. That also means that I haven’t got much to show in class… I just hope that I will have an epiphany in the next couple of days, because I’d really love to continue on my idea the way it is now.

To end this post (and this blog), I want to say that I really enjoyed this class. There was a great vibe in the room all semester long and I really appreciate how many creative people are working on awesome things right now. I am so sad that I cannot be there for the final exhibition, but hey – who if not a class of DIKULT-experts could come up with a way to show us around digitally? 🙂


Last blog post for the semester

Hello, this will be my last blogg this semester and i will say thank you to all the readers that have followed my journey trough e-lit class

This blogg post was original about the e-lit project “one star review” but for some reason the links tjat I have recived will not work. Ibthink maybe is because its some strange protection on the wi -fi i use, And I sadly didn’t had the time to go to a place there I got free wi-fi. For this i’m deeply sorry.

Instead I will write about my semester with e-lit class and my own e-lit project.

The e-lit class was alot of of fun I learned a lot of new stuff that I didn’t know about the world of e-lit. One of the best part of the class was the many different prenstations about all the different e-lit projects. I think this was a hreat way to let students learn and debate the different meanings of e-lit. Also to have the opportunity to make our own e-lit is a lot of fun. I’m really looking forward to se what all the different creative studens of the class will cook up. To day it short: this class is the most fun I had at the university so far

 

My own e-lit project is going good.  I have showed what I have so far to some of the other students and the feedback has been positive.

So far I have done the front page and 3 of the 4 lyrics page are done and the 4th is halfway done. For the own story pages tje layout for each page is done, but I need to put in the story.

If you are curious about whats song will be used. I can spoil that one of the songs are Pet shops boy “west end girl” and the personal story is connected to the lyrics and the song itself.

So sum it up, this semester have been a blast and the elit prject is going forward. See you soon


#8 Getting Personal – about my own Elit

I can not believe this semester is heading towards its end already. And with that comes the fun part of being a student: term papers, exams, projects and deadlines.
For our Elit class, we are supposed to create our own piece of Elit . From what I have heard so far my classmates are planning some really amazing stuff and I can not wait to see the final results. And who knows – maybe we are even planning to release something at the end of it all?

Finding Ideas 
As I mentioned before, my classmates planned some incredible stuff – games, poems, netprovs … you name it.
My own project is going to include short stories and poems (and even some pictures if I can include them the way I want them to be included in this). I always loved to write and even though I usually write for myself and never showed it to anybody, I think its nice to put something out there. At first I struggled to find a theme/topic that fit, but after reading through some old notes and walking around Bergen I decided that I wanted one of the main topics to be nature and how we connect with it in today’s society. Nature is one of the most important things in our lives – whether we realize it or not – and I think we sometimes need to make ourselves aware that its resources are limited and can not be replaced. As I’m still working on the works I don’t know what I really gonna end up with – to me writing is a lot about change and I can’t even tell how many times I changed the stuff I’ve written so far. But I’m pretty sure there will be other themes coming up – but I don’t want to give away too much just yet.

About the technical stuff
I have to admit – I don’t know anything about computer games, coding, or any other technical stuff (in fact, I don’t even know what I don’t know). I know about printing books and how you can make a text look pretty in a it but that’s all I can do with a computer and the right software (not really helpful for Elit though).
One of the most important things (or let’s just call it one of our assignments) for our project was to make it interactive. So I had to face two problems: 1. How can I make/write/create something that is interactive or has interactive elements? And 2. How can I achieve this with my non-existing knowledge of coding/it-stuff/anything technical?
I think I found a satisfactory solution for problem number 1 – not I just have to find a way to solve number 2.

Due to some other project that I have to hand in in three days (well no I just checked – two days) I have not worked as much on this project as I would have liked. But after handing in this term paper in my whole life (which, fun fact, is the last term paper in my whole life) I will finally have enough time to focus on this project and I am sure I will come up wit solutions to all problems that go along with its development. 

 

 


Failed attempt at netprov (aka update on my own elit)

This is to be my final official blogpost for #elitclass. If I will continue blogging, we will just have to wait and see.

For our final blog entry we have been asked to participate in a netprov called “one-star reviews” where we create a character through a reddit account, and write a review stating we really like something about something which everyone else seems to really dislike. I have tried all week to find time for creating a character and find something to write my review about without success. The past week and the two upcoming weeks will be the busiest weeks of the semester for me, and therefore my time has gone to working on my own piece instead of contributing to someone else’s.

I have read through some of the rules and instructions for One-star Reviews and checked out the netprov itself. I wish I would have had time to check it out more closely and participate myself,  but sadly no. I must say though that I find the project very interesting. Even when I go on sites online like TripAdvisor I kind of tend to to read the bad reviews before the good ones, so yeah – the topic of this netprov is interesting to me.

 

So, about my own elit piece…
Earlier this week, I run into a huge problem. My starting point of the story was gone, and instead the starting point was in the middle of my story with a loop at the end going back to the original beginning. It took me a long, long time to figure out. At one point I was ready to give up and start all over with the whole story. Honestly I was about to cry at this point because I have worked so much and so hard on this story.  

Luckily, after some time, I managed to save the story and get back to how it was supposed to be. I am not sure if it is 100% how it was before, but if not then the changes are too small to really matter. What did I learn from this? Make sure the top of the page in Inklewriter says “saved” before signing out! Even though I am not sure if this is what caused my troubles, the page said “saving…” when I signed out and then when I signed back in later on everything was messed up.

I still haven’t fixed my issue when it comes to the layout where I wanted the lines of the poems on separate lines instead of being a regular paragraph – but honestly I have gotten used to the way it looks and it has definitely grown on me. Therefore fixing this will not be a priority to me anymore – if I end up having extra time towards the end (I highly doubt it) I might reconsider but for now I will ignore it.

I continue to make progress on my story. Most paths are still unfinished, but within another week or two I think most of those will be finished as well. I think the paths will have around 10-15 choices in total (depending on the path) and just as many poems. Most choices have two alternatives, but at some points the reader might only get one choice depending on previous decisions. So far I do not think any choices have more than two options, but different paths may get the same choices with different options than the other. Does that make sense? I hope it does.

When it comes to Inklewriter, I have gotten used to working with it and like it for the most part. However, I have not yet figured out how the if-statement function works – at the same time though I haven’t tried it that much because honestly I do not see it necessary for my project. It would possibly have made working on my story a bit easier, but then again I do not know if it would save me enough time for it to be worth the time it takes to figure out.

Another thing with Inklewriter is that when you get to a new page, you can write a new paragraph or use one you have already written for another path of the story. In my case, many of the paths at one point are at the same place in the story as another path and therefore I reuse the paragraphs often more than once. The problem with this I discovered was that I do not just copy-paste the paragraphs, but if I change one of them then all places the paragraph is in use will be changed too. This made it harder for me to have smaller changes to each path’s version of the same page.

Copy-pasting the old fashioned way is not easy with Inklewriter because you can only do it one paragraph at the time. This means that if you have several paragraphs you have to go back and forth between the two pages, which takes a lot of time once your story map gets up to a certain size.

One last thing I do not like about Inklewriter is the design. There is only one design to choose from, with no ways to customize it. Also the design makes the story look like a good old book, which kinda defeats the purpose of electronic literature – at least to me. Therefore I really hope Inklewriter gives the writer more designs to choose from in the future.

All in all though, I enjoy working with Inklewriter. For the most part it is simple and user-friendly. It somehow motivates me to work on my project because I can just work on my project without the hassle of having to figure out how to do everything. I did not need to watch tutorials on how it works – I just created an account and tried it out myself, figuring things out rather fast. Earlier in the semester I tried Twine just to see if it would be a tool I could be interested in working with, and let’s just say I did not try it out for more than a few minutes before having to search for tutorials.

I decided to work with Inklewriter, despite the limited possibilities of customisation, because it is just so much more user-friendly – at least in my opinion. I am not saying Twine is bad, I am just saying that to me Inklewriter is better to work with.

 

I guess that’s it for now.
Thank you for reading my blog!

 

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