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Jenny From The Blog 2025-12-17 16:28:02

I want to take a moment to thank my Electronic Literature classmates for welcoming me into a world that was completely new to me. This course was an unexpected learning experience, and a deeply appreciated one. I walked in unsure of how I would fit into a space filled with such creative writers and thinkers, but each of you taught me something. Your projects, your interpretations, your willingness to experiment, and even the way you discussed the readings pushed me to grow in ways I didn’t anticipate.

I am especially grateful to Dr. Zamora. She is an extraordinary professor: engaged, encouraging, patient, and genuinely invested in her students. She mentored me through material that felt foreign at first, and she helped me believe I could actually do this work. My only regret is that we met at the very end of my graduate journey rather than at the beginning.

This class opened up a part of literature I did not realize existed. Interacting with electronic literature, and with all of you who approach storytelling so differently, expanded my understanding of what writing can be. It challenged me to think beyond traditional forms and to participate in a creative conversation that felt alive and unpredictable and above all CREATIVE (something I have missed from my life).

I would recommend this class to every graduate student, but with one caveat: you have to be willing to push yourself. There is a lot of reading, a lot of writing, and a lot of thinking. It asks you to stretch, to experiment, and sometimes to sit in confusion until something clicks. But it is absolutely worth it.

Thank you all for helping me discover something new at a time in my degree when I thought I already knew what to expect. I’m leaving this class more open, more curious, and honestly, a little proud of myself for making it through. I hope you enjoy playing/reading/experimenting with “Is The Grass Always Greener?”

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1SCo2PqoaMX7KDYfU92wejVg3_OhA7muEZlhUgiBCbvo/edit?usp=sharing

E Lit Progress Update: Learning More Than I Expected

As I moved from planning my e lit project into actually creating it, I quickly realized I had taken on more than I fully understood. I began searching for platforms and tools, only to discover that I had no idea how to use RenPy, Twine, or anything remotely connected to coding. I had never written a line of code in my life, yet here I was trying to build an interactive digital love story.

This is where the perks of teaching tech-savvy students came in. One of my students teased me for not knowing how to use Twine and insisted that there was no way I could use RenPy without learning to code first. Instead of feeling discouraged, it motivated me. She spent an entire week showing me how things worked, and I slowly learned the basics of CSS, JavaScript, and variables.

I am still figuring out how to embed images and occasionally break something by accident, but the progress I’ve made feels huge. More than anything, I’m proud that I didn’t back down from the challenge. This project is pushing me to grow in ways I didn’t expect, and even with its frustrations, it’s becoming something I’m genuinely excited about.

Onward to the final step.

That’s a Wrap Take Care, All!

Our last class of the semester was both exciting and a little bittersweet. The potluck-style gathering gave us a chance to unwind and celebrate, while presenting our projects one final time made me reflect on how much we’ve all grown. As I shared my work, I felt like I should be further along, but I reminded myself that progress isn’t about perfection and that the project would eventually come together. I really valued everyone’s feedback, it sparked new ideas and gave me motivation to keep going, even with the work that still remains. I had originally started my project in WordPress, but it became challenging to manage, so I switched to a custom website at the last minute. It feels more secure and easier to work with, and I’m excited to see the project fully take shape.

This course has been an incredibly meaningful experience. It opened my eyes to how different electronic literature is from traditional storytelling. Working with it encouraged me to think beyond words on a page, taking into account design, interactivity, and user experience as part of the narrative. The process challenged me to be creative, problem-solve, and step outside of my comfort zone, particularly while developing and refining my final project. I’m grateful for the feedback, support, and ideas shared throughout the semester as they shaped my work in ways I didn’t anticipate.

As this journey comes to an end, I’m excited to continue building on what I’ve learned and see where these skills take me next. I can’t wait to finally finish my project and see it all come together. 

Wishing everyone the best of luck with their final projects and future endeavors, and wishing you all a safe, happy, and healthy holiday season!

My Migration


Hello everyone!

This is my last blog post for this semester. I wanted to insert the link to my final project here so you all would be able to click on it and work your way through it if you would like.

As the end of my final semester as a graduate student at Kean nears, I would like to thank you all for a fun semester! Moving through such a diverse selection of literature was much more interesting to do with you all than it would have ever been if I did it on my own.

I also wanted to share this really interesting thought I had after our last class meeting. I was quite enamored with these birds migrating, and found that each time I visited the pond and figured the birds had left for the winter, I was saddened. Despite feeling sad about these birds leaving, I was also so invigorated by their natural beauty and proud they were able to continue on their journey. I think it is somewhat reflective of my own migration from Union to my soon-to-be new hometown. It is crazy how such things manifest into our work without our noticing it. I just wanted to share that small tidbit with you all, as this project, albeit simple, is very me and telling of the specific life experience I am going through right now.

With that, here is the link to my final project. I hope to see everyone’s final projects as well.

Happy holidays.

https://avacamargo6.wixsite.com/themigrationarchive

Finishing Up

I finished up my project by adding some hidden easter eggs alluding to poems throughout “The Wild Iris” by Louise Glück (the book my Minecraft experience is based on).

I planned to present my work by reading some key poems from the book before going through the experience in order to create context for those who haven’t read the book (although I highly recommend you read it if you like poetry!)

I’m hoping to receive feedback in class about anything I might be able to add in order to make the experience feel more fulfilling.

Last Post

Hey Everyone!

We made it to the end!

I am happy to report that my project is about 70% done. I am very excited about it.

The whole project takes place inside Google Sheets. It starts with a sheet with two links. One takes you to a website that allows you to generate scrolling text from the opening of Star Wars. The text is a suicide note from the protagonist. After that, you go back to the sheet to continue.

Next is the iceberg. There are x’s inside the boxes in the iceberg. When you click on one, it takes you to another page in the sheet. The things above the iceberg are things that are out in the open and the things below the iceberg are hidden by the protagonist.

There are different elements that I have used. There is prose about the protagonists life before their suicide. There are song lyrics that have been made into blackout poems with links to Youtube videos of the song. There are clips from anime. If you don’t know the source material, the clips seem out of place. For example, one clip is from an anime where the protagonist kills themselves and wakes up in a new world where everyone has wings, yet people who commit suicide have black wings.

I’m going to include one hidden thing. I am going to make a box behind the moon that links to a sheet. It will take all of the songs that are included in the piece and put them in order. There will be a note from the protagonist telling the reader that when they die, this is the playlist for their funeral.

The piece is meant to be confusing, maybe a little disorienting, and not fully understood in a narrative sense. There is no one reason why the protagonist commits suicide and I want the reader to see that. I guess the reader is going through the life of someone who committed suicide and trying to put all the pieces together.

That’s a Wrap

This week I pretty much finished my final project. I say “pretty much” because I anticipate some feedback during tomorrow’s class and will want to make some final changes before submitting. I think I will definitely need feedback on the pacing of my piece and if I accomplished a light-hearted experience. It is so crazy that we are at the end of the semester and that this upcoming class will be my last Monday class EVER.

I enjoyed using Canva for this project. I had fun choosing the graphics and writing the dialogue. I was tempted many times to purchase Canva premium but I decided against it. I ran into a few speed bumps along the way but thank goodness for Youtube and having people who know how to use Canva well. I am looking forward to getting feedback from you all and seeing all of your projects!

Last update on project?

I’m not sure if this is the last update on the project but I can definitely say I have finished my final project this weekend. I’m also not sure if I ever fully coherently described by project but here ya go: For my final project, I created an interactive story on Twine. The story is called “Straightener Spirals”. This story follows a girl who struggles with anxiety and OCD, and her thoughts spiral around as she fixates on something as simple as a hair straightener. Through clickable choices, the player will attempt to guide the speaker into a calmer direction, but the story highlights that anxiety and OCD look different for everyone. Sometimes rational advice is neither realistic nor helpful. This platform allows the player to explore multiple options, but each choice reflects how intrusive thoughts can overpower logic. “Straightener Spirals is meant to create empathy by placing the reader directly inside the experience of spiraling, where they are unable to control even if they are just trying to help.

Now, the only thing that disappoints me is that if I had more time, I would’ve like to found another website that allows me to add music or some kind of ominous soundtrack to add to the readers emotions as they are making their way through the piece. Additionally, I am literally going into class blind, for some reason the course website did not work for me this Sunday. I wanted to check to see what exactly I should have prepared, but hey..at least I am done :).

Finishing Touches


I hope everyone is moving forward with their respective projects. I am really looking forward to our last meeting on Monday, not only because it just brings me one day closer to completing my degree, but also because each project is so unique.

As far as my own project goes, I feel I am at about 70% done, so 5% less than what is required for Monday. I have most of the haikus written, just want to have seven more, so each section I have to organize it all has four haikus, plus each section’s landing page haiku. In total, I should have 24 haikus, all original to me. I’m really happy that these haikus are being put to use, as I have been writing them without knowledge of this project since the beginning of the semester.

So, I’m not sure if I will have all of the haikus written by Monday, but I have enough to give everyone an idea of how this project will look fully finished. I have the design of the website down, so even without all of the haikus posted there yet, you all will be able to get an idea as to how it will look.

The 5% that I really want to fill in before Monday is the inclusion of sound. Again, I’m not worried about this, as I found that website that contains thousands of free-use audio. So, it’s just a matter of finding ones that I like and inputting them. I’m not sure if I want to include sound of every page, as there is some overlap of the content of a couple of haikus being about the same bird. But, what if the reader doesn’t read both haikus? Well, I think I just answered my question, and I will have sound for every page.

In all, I will try to have the rest of those haikus written, but we’ll see. I do want to have some sounds in there. I might not have all of them, but having it for some of the pages is a definite. I have also begun carving out the narrative a bit and hyperlinked some pages to each other, but not all of them yet because I don’t have all of the haikus. I will have some examples of this for Monday, but I might not have all the pathways picked out just yet. Though, we’ll see how many haikus I can write this weekend.

Final Project

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I was excited about creating my own electronic literature piece; now I’m a stressed mess about it.  The end of my Masters has been so much more taxing then I even could have anticipated. My nerves are shot and I have several (4) larger projects to finish up. I have already taken my comprehensive exam and I have my defense on Friday.

I originally thought it would be fun to do a parody of on-line dating, where you could pick your own destiny (pull downs or easy to answer questions) but even that has become terribly difficult.  I cannot figure-out the html piece of this project.

I have a couple of ‘prewritten’ pieces I thought about utilizing, but no matter what I pick I’m having a very difficult time executing.  I’m not trying to learn code, and even the simplest navigation is difficult for me. I’ve read other peoples experiences and blogs and I have to say that I’m impressed with the over all great attitude and self esteem this class has as a whole.

I’ve been working on this for days and I’m no closer to having anything to share with the class, but I’m going to continue to try.  I need to focus better, just follow my instincts and stick to a single subject.  I’m going to try and storyboard this for easier execution. 

Visiting my family in Spain was important to me, I had not planned to take a Monday night class when I made the arrangements, and missing two classes is very much not like me.  I’m bummed that I missed workshopping this, it would have been helpful.  I’m going to read the notes and everything else I can get my hands on and do the best job I can with what I have and what I know.