Yardley, PA 1997: I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I loved that it was a multi-sensory activity. Initially I just clicked through but I did notice sound-wise something sounded off so once I read the little description about the “score” and all that, it made a lot more sense. I really loved the actual poem itself but I also loved that it was also interactive in performance of the piece. It was more simple and effective as far as electronic literature goes. It was straightforward as far as what to expect going into this piece. Before this piece, the other pieces we walked through so far have had hidden like “easter eggs” somewhere within the piece and having many ways of navigation. The different approach to navigation of previous pieces could be fun but it is also overwhelming at times. Being in class and realizing I missed a whole section because I didn’t click the small illustration in the top left that unlocked the entire meaning of the piece could feel discouraging. I think this is a good entryway into the world of electronic literature. Yardley, PA 1997 had a very nostalgic feel and a layer of melancholy.
Avenue S: This piece executed the chaotic and uneasy feeling of the COVID-19 pandemic. I don’t think we acknowledge as a society how traumatic that time was like the world really shut down. We witnessed people dying, the feed of misinformation, fear mongering, divide, isolation, and so much more through our screens and in our lives. We simply could not escape anything (and still really can’t). We cannot move through the world without acknowledging that the world is different post-pandemic. I was definitely feeling overwhelmed with so many different things to click on but my favorite piece that I got to was the collage titled “THE GREAT EMPTY”. It gave a very disjointed feeling but still conveyed exactly what was happening during that time. We lost many things at that time but I think one of the hardest things we are struggling with to bring back is a sense of community and socialization. I thought the artwork was very effective as well as the pieces of poetry that were embedded through the piece for example the haiku called “Covid haiku” by Sally Stein on the section titled “mask culture”. Overall, this piece made me feel very overwhelmed.



