Understanding through Stories

“Writers are not Strangers”

Writers Are Not Strangers succeeds in dramatizing that writers are real people with real feelings. It tells the story of Alix, a writer, along with her dying mother, her aunt, and a meteorite threatening Earth. The piece gives a similar emotional resonance to Hana Feels, although the setting and tone are very different. You can tell this story takes place in a future shaped by technology, artificial intelligence, and influencer culture, most likely somewhere in Iceland due to the volcano mentioned. There is an impending doom that we are aware of, alongside the passing of Alix’s mother, who was once a hero of sorts.

I disliked how technology and the era of AI seemed to desensitize everyone from the real world and the things happening around them. I wanted to see Alix grieve her mother, or even her pet fish that I named Darla (it’s giving Finding Nemo). Instead, everyone just continues on as if the city has not been affected, as if making content is more important than acknowledging that the world is slowly crumbling at their feet. Still, I loved the creativity of the piece, especially seeing Alix’s reactions to my choices and ratings. At one point, after she visited her mother and wrote a post, she didn’t seem to care at all about the rating I gave her work, which felt both powerful and sad.

The plot, however, feels less important than the overall theme: how readers can affect the lives of writers. At one point, I used a combination of the scores I gave her writing as a passcode to access the hospital wing where she could see her mother one last time. As the player, you rate stories that Alix has written, and she reacts emotionally to those ratings. At other times, you make decisions for Alix herself, switching back and forth between being her reader and being Alix.

Alix responds to the ratings you give her when you are playing as a reader. For example, the first story of hers that I read was difficult to follow, so I gave it a low rating. Later, I watched her go through an exhausting visit to the hospital to see her dying mother. When she checked her ratings afterward, she was deeply upset by the low score. I felt as if I had punched her in the gut after she had already been through something emotionally draining. Yet at the same time, I was Alix, because I had been the one guiding her through those same moments. In a strange way, I had hurt myself.

This pattern continues throughout the piece, as you keep rating Alix’s stories and watching how she responds. Her later stories are even influenced by your previous ratings. I found myself trying to be honest and give her work the scores I thought it deserved, but I also felt tempted to give higher ratings just to protect her feelings. This creates a tension many players will probably experience.

By the end, Alix no longer feels like a stranger. You come to know her both through her writing and through the small glimpses of her life. The title becomes true, at least within the world of the story. It also made me think about how in real life we never get to “play” as our favorite writers. We are only the readers, not Alix, and it raises the question of how much we can truly know someone through their writing. Sometimes we can, but often the familiarity we feel is just an illusion. Still, Writers Are Not Strangers reminds us that writers are real people with real emotions behind every piece they create.

Retratos Vivos de Mamá
The second piece, Retratos Vivos de Mamá, pairs surprisingly well with Writers Are Not Strangers. Both explore memory, grief, and the act of preserving connection, though one does it through technology and the other through storytelling and remembrance.

Retratos Vivos de Mamá deeply moved me. It’s a meditation on discovering and honoring a mother’s life after her death. I resonated with it personally because I care deeply about preserving the memories of the women in my family, their strength, struggles, and sacrifices. I’ve been blessed to know both my great-grandmother and grandmother before their passings in 2019 and 2022, and understanding their experiences as matriarchs and eldest daughters helps me see my own mother with more compassion and grace.

One quote that struck me translates to:

“She will peer into the past. She will listen silently. She will take careful note of everything she hears and sees. She will retrieve the photos from all the albums. And she will return to the present with her suitcase full of voices. She will return to give a second life to the woman who was her mother before she had children. She will invent another life for her mother.”

The women in my family have always loved photographs, and we have albums spanning four generations. Each picture holds a story, a voice, a moment frozen in time. This piece reminded me that revisiting those memories is an act of both grief and rebirth.

The mother-daughter relationship can be complicated, especially when trauma stretches across generations. I’ve felt resentment toward my own mother at times, but learning her story has helped me understand her humanity and pain. The line, “Two things remain with me today: the certainty of never having truly understood my mother, and the solace of having tried to understand her at the end of her life,” made me pause. It’s a reminder that understanding our mothers while they’re still alive is both a privilege and a necessity. My mother lost her own mother just a few years ago after more than fifteen years apart. I often wonder what conversations they didn’t get to have or what memories they missed. Even as I grieve parts of my own relationship with her, I know some things are best left resting. Healing is slow, one day at a time.

Both Writers Are Not Strangers and Retratos Vivos de Mamá explore what it means to connect through writing, memory, and loss. One asks whether readers can truly know the writer, and the other asks how we can keep our mothers alive through stories and remembrance. Together, they show that words, whether written or remembered, are one of the few ways we can make sense of love, grief, and being human.

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Writers Are Not Strangers

‘Writers Are Not Strangers’ has many stories, and at first, the stories did not make much sense, so I had to rate them as well. Then, as I read further, the stories started to make sense. It was like a game where, at the end of each story, you had to either answer a multiple-choice question or fill in the blank, and then the story would add the name or word you placed in the blank, which was very interesting. Each story was different, covering assorted topics that took Alix on a personal journey with her friends. I found it to be long and sometimes hard to follow and understand.

Alix is a young YouTube-style content creator and writer whose mother is hospitalized and nearing death. Alix’s stories reference classics like Middlemarch and games like Space Invaders, providing a layered commentary on derivative creativity and originality. They blend fiction, game mechanics, and critical theory into compelling digital experiences. Again, I found that at times it was hard to follow and confusing. It is all about Alix’s journey in her life with her friends and family.

Retrotas Vivo de Mama

Carolina Lopez Jimenez is a Colombian writer and artist working across different disciplines. “Mom Living Portraits” was published online in 2015 and is still being updated. It is a documentary, hypertext narrative, and autobiographical electronic literature. Inspired by Lopez’s mother’s prolonged illness and passing, it explores mourning and memory within an evolving digital space. “Retrotas Vivo de Mama” is a scrapbook of Lopez Jimenez’s mother, beautifully created in Spanish, where her mother’s voice narrates various stages of her life and her family. The scrapbook is filled with family photos that tell a compelling story; it was beautifully made. It feels as if her mother’s voice is speaking aloud throughout, telling her story. I lost my mother a year ago, and I am thinking about creating an online digital scrapbook for her, highlighting our family and her life’s various stages. This has inspired me to make a digital scrapbook with photos of my mother and our family, which I believe is a wonderful idea and could serve as a heartfelt tribute mother.

By: Lareice Weeks-Bigelow

Retratos vivos de mama y Writers Are Not Strangers

Writers are Not Strangers & Retratos vivos de Mama

Retratos Vivos de Mama

A personal journey of creative  Elit inspired by the process of mourning, and how we find our own ways to reflect, heal, mourn the loss of someone we cared deeply for. I can resonate with the theme; there have been a few recent times where I lost some loved ones who were close friends or was in an extensive relationship with. Both of these were different types of mourning. One I knew I wouldn’t ever see again, the other I wasn’t sure. We don’t always get to prepare for the emotions that follow with grief, despair, guilt, loneliness and many others along the way. We do though have the opportunity to find creative outlets to help us express our emotions and deal with the feelings not always accessible when we want them to be. Our relationships whether they are family or friends become extensions of ourselves. When those extensions are no longer for the many mortal reasons, it becomes challenging to find  ways to bandage that wound once they are removed. I do appreciate that the Author provides flexibility to her readers in approaching and engagement of this Elit with allowing us to digest or take bits and pieces or a whole with navigating and reading depending on how much we are willing to commit to the piece. Also, how she mindfully notifies her readers when she adds to the piece, and the freedom for the individual to come and go anytime with interacting and having no strings attached. Even though I could not translate much of the Spanish I still found ways to engage with this electronic literature.

Cuarto Oscuro (Diario De Duelo, Papel Quemado Por La Luz, Carrete De Recuerdos)

On the main screen, once accessing the work a 45 second video follows the wood grain that is filled with cracks that go in many divert in many directions like our feelings. The cracks in our psyche that form from the trauma, mourning and many other feelings we deal with in our lives. As the video starts to climb we are faced with knots in the barks, obstructions. This seemed to represent the knots that we feel in our body, throat, when hit with the mourning, grief of loved ones. These take up a big part of our inner real estate forming in both our minds and bodies physically, mentally and spiritually.  

I enjoyed flipping thought the diary, journal and all the images, sketches/scrap book that she placed on each page along with the text. It was filled with personal symbolic  artifacts and welcoming to want to read and go all the way through as far as I could. The scroll bar also made it convenient and was a thoughtful courtesy for reading. In the video clip provided in the Papel Quemado Por La Luz sectionseemed to me like a behind the scenes experiences of her process and the creation of her shrine with using collage, the process and final pieces are the act of healing and once again bringing her close to her mother’s life.

Soplo

The interactive element of both different color accordion files, while being able to access each months importance in the timeline of someone’s life and events having different personal content, materials was enticing to keep interacting with. A time capsule of sort, information that justifies a person’s existence, and place in time, proof they existed and reflection.

Revelado

This section of the for me was a complex area of involvement. The film strip on the screen right away gives you the interaction opportunities to decide where you want to explore. I did make my choices out of order. Liking the Voces with the video projection instillation and the timeliness of fading in and out of life with the woman figure doing a task or chore.

Planto

This section I felt empowering with the soil, earth as the background substrate of the screen and the text moving, bouncing uncontrollably like a frantic movement.

Writers Are Not Strangers

Once I began interacting and answering the multiple choice questions that coincided with the readings I felt a similarity, and responsibility of curiousness to what my selections would result in like interacting with the previous Elit Façade, minus the audio and characters. The imagery I had to make up in my own mind to follow as I read each brief story and added on it with my selections to carry forward. One thing I did feel was not being sure if what I chose to select even mattered. Was it just part of the interaction, making me feel like I actually was creating meaning, or had a significant role to how the characters’ conversation evolved or how they felt during about what was happening to the world. My assumption was the world was facing a certain catastrophic event that would be inevitable to discuss, recognize as fact and be involved in no matter what your position was on the side of the table, fan or creator.

After reading the brief opening text I chose the number 7 for rating. Then began the journey and clicking on the Next button, the day Thursday appeared in bold letters on the screen with another longer story, and some options to answer a multiple choice question to then once again advancing with the piece by clicking on Next. The story was one of a challenge to follow, it seems all her effort paid off but now she faced her fans, once one herself. Now, being on the other side of the table in the queue as a creator and signing fans’ merchandise she felt differently of her life’s work. It seemed to be a confession of how she was now stuck in showing face and keeping fans happy, even though she knew they were taking it too seriously. Experiencing her interaction with Billie a  friend who showed up in line questioning her, made interacting with the piece seem like I was also there witnessing the uncomfortable encounter of what I would do in that situation choosing the appropriate multiple choice answer to keep things at ease and not be rude to a friend, but mindful of my time if that was me. I did try to analyze why I made each choice out of the 3 selections. From my own personal values, it seems these were accurate to being mindful of others feelings, appreciative of the support showing respect to them, or being optimistic.

Selections Chosen: Thursday

“These people, were her livelihood after all”

“We should meet for coffee sometime real soon”

Sixty Signatures Later

“Dietmar’s right. People coming together like this should be celebrated, now more than ever”

Time To Go…

Where’s Alix rushing off to?

Another story appeared; I could tell this would be different from the previous discussion. It began mentioning food, a new scene, tone of content. I couldn’t tell if this was about Alix or another story entirely different, or extension until her name was mentioned in the middle. This interaction with her relatives, Aunt Annie and Uncle Simon seemed dysfunctional and I didn’t want to really read much of it. Her Aunt Serita though she seemed to have some sort of connection with. They didn’t seem to see Alix as a person or support her. I kept going for a little but lost further interest. Maybe it was just the day or how I was feeling. It was funny and ironic since it seems that Alix also was trying to find a way to slip away making excuses about having to go home to her “pet” which I chose dog. Next wondering about what was happening with her parents I continued to interact more out of curiosity.

I was curious during my interaction with this story of what would happen if I click Restart at the top of the screen and chose a different rating number from the beginning. This thing just keep going! I will wait to hear what my fellow classmates did in their interaction. Impressive to have certain angles covered depending on what the reader chooses for an answer. I did decide out of curiosity and my enjoyment of electronic literature to keep embarking on this journey. The hospital visit scene was another very descriptive reading, it also reinforced that there was some dysfunction and broken relationship with Alix and her mother. This conversation and my involvement was deeply felt, as I was also in the room almost chaperoning the discussion hoping it would go in a caring direction where Annie, Alix and her mother could encounter peace or solace with each other. This was when I made the choice to finish. Disoriented feelings and being confused of Annie and the Mother and who was who made me not wanting to know anymore. I think it became to much to follow and I lost interest quickly.

“Retratos Vivos de Mamá” & “Writers Are Not Strangers”

“Retratos Vivos De Mamá” was ultra fun for me to consume. Firstly, I only understand basic elementary Spanish, so a lot of my “reading” was a lot of inferring. Secondly, as a dedicated scrapbooker, the art style tickled me!

Making a digital work feel as paper-like and creative as “Retratos Vivos de Mamá” made it just as much a piece of art as it was an interactive literary work. The attention to detail tells a story in itself.

Someone is baring their soul so obviously that no language barrier could stop you from recognizing the layers of intricacy required to make something both interactive and beautiful.

“Writers Are Not Strangers” feels kind of cold in contrast. The interactive portions feel disconnected, like no matter what you choose, something random will appear in front of you. Every time I reloaded the project, it began with a new story.

Retratos vivos de mamá

Honestly, as someone who is writing an intergenerational memoir of their Bangladeshi grandmother as their thesis, this piece of literature hit home for me. At first, I will say I searched everywhere to find some kind of translation option, and even if it was there.. I probably didn’t understand it haha. I will also say that, I love when writers include their native tongue in their work because representation truly matters. I can’t imagine how readers of Latin American or Colombian descent feel when they see their roots being told into a story. As someone who is married to a Puerto Rican Colombian, I was ecstatic while going through this piece. Now, on to the actual piece itself. Retratos vivos de mamá is definitely a read that made me work work work! Having to translate every page was tedious, but worth it. The topic of your parents life before kids isn’t usually spoken about that often… until its too late. I see many grieving videos of people who lost a parent and they always add: “I wish I asked them about their childhood”. I know so much about my grandmother who is so dear to me, but not as much as my own mothers life. I grew up in a very rocky relationship with my mother, and have resented her for many years for a traumatic childhood. After I moved out from NYC and started my life here in NJ, we have gotten closer and our relationship has been healing. Now that we’re closer (ish), I do find myself wondering how my mother was at my age.. or even younger. Im 26 and by then she already had two daughters lol. This may be quite dark, but I have this feeling that my mother will be the topic of all of my writing when she passes one day… as she is the topic of all my poetry now. After reading this piece, I want to know more about my mothers childhood, her boyfriend, the men before my father, and all of her interests that probably were passed down to me. I especially enjoyed towards the end of the pages when the writer says “ I found out how much of her lives in me and his much of me I put in her when I write”. Because thats essentially what my own work consists of. Lastly, I do appreciate the “book” form the electronic lit piece takes because you get to flip through a sort of old “Scrapbook”. 

Writers are not Strangers 

I am a sucker for interactive stories. Ever since we did Facade and then Tyler’s Google Forms one, we’re been on a roll! I will say the connection between Alix’s mother dying and us also reading Retratos vivos de mamá is uncanny! I think as writers we were all pretty honest with our ratings because we would want the same for ourselves. I have been really enjoying having the control in a story because maybe thats the chaotic person in me trying to ruin things. I guess I was also trying to see what would happen if rated it like a 1 and then pressed on the options that weren’t so great..which is what I did. I feel like the game was trying to punish me because I swear it was never ending. I think since I was playing the game as a jerk, there were significant pieces I was missing out on.. so I am really interested to see how Hunter tackles this piece! 

Retratos vivos de mamá (1.0) and Writers Are Not Strangers

I was able to translate the text of the piece to English which was helpful but I actually viewed it first in Spanish. I don’t speak Spanish (even though I took the Spanish classes from first grade to freshman year of college). When I walked through in English, I could tell that the way it was written in Spanish was beautiful. Translating language always changes a piece but I still think regardless this piece carried so much weight. Visually I really loved this piece. The scrapbook feel made it feel personal and I want to say homey. I really loved the audio clips and the videos even though I didn’t know what they were saying, it gave a spotlight to the mom. I really loved the page with the black screen and the spotlight on the one page. It felt kind of reminiscent to how grief forces us to get glimmers of a memory at a time.

In my adult life, I had an epiphany. My parents were parents at my age and I think about being a parent right now and I just don’t even know how they did that. I like to hear stories of my parents before kids and I often find myself comparing things I am doing in my life to stories I’ve heard from theirs. Any party/gathering I throw at my house the thought of “i wonder if this is how the parties at my parents first house were” or something along those lines. I really connected with the idea of uncovering a parent’s identity before they were parents. It is so fun to think about to me but I also found the idea of the author kind of creating a life for her mom before she was a mom to be so interesting and heartbreaking. The diary entries were so so heartbreaking to me. The line “the closest thing to her left on earth are my brother and I.” gave me goosebumps. The “Planto” section was AMAZING. I loved the poetry and the interactive element. Overall, this piece not only was visually appealing, moving, meaningful but it also made room for a lot of reflection. I thought this was such an amazing piece and I’m looking forward to the walk-through in class.

Before deciding on The Vine and The Fish, I thought about choosing Writers Are Not Strangers. I was excited to walk through this one this week. My story was one about a girl named Alix whose mother is dying. I don’t think we all end up with the same prompt at the start or really at all during the piece. The third page I ended up on in (and second of a cohesive story) gave me choices on what the character does next. How cool is that! You all know I love a choose your own adventure kind of thing. At one point one of the choices said something along the lines of “What does this have to do with the story I rated?!” But I didn’t click that so that I could stay with one story. I was afraid clicking that option would have brought me somewhere else like Twelve Blue. Alix’s father had died and she had obtained his notebook. She is a writer who posts her work to be rated online (interesting). A line I loved from this section is in reference to her dad’s notebook and it reads as follows: “he was aware of the preciousness of writing with a real pen on real paper”. We have spoken about why writing is important and I think this line here kind of dictates how I feel about writing which is that it is precious and it’s immortal. Overall, I think the two pieces this week had a lot of parallels. I really enjoyed both of these pieces and I look forward to the presentations!

Mother Daughter Relationships are complicated

Retratos vivos de mama by Carolina López Jiménez

Retratos vivos de mama by Carolina López Jiménez this weeks electronic literature journey, I immediately was aware of how personal this experience felt. I loved that you could actually turn the pages of a book, it gave this piece the feeling of a real book (which I kind of have missed since this classes start), even though this experience was digital. The physical scrapbook filled with memories made me feel like I was a part of the story. The mix of handwritten notes, drawings, and photos made it feel alive, it made me think that I might even do something like this one day – something creative and expressive.

Even though the videos were in Spanish and I couldn’t fully understand what was being said, I still tried to listen closely to the tone and emotion behind the voices.

Mother Daughter relationships are complex. My mother is still alive, and our lives are closely intertwined, I stay at her house on weekdays to help her out, then go to my own home on weekends. Reading and watching Retratos vivos de mamá made me think about how every moment with my Mom is creating a new memory.  While it is impossible to imagine, my Moms age and health dictates that I should be aware that one day my life will exist without her.  I begin to say what a loss this would be for me personally and all who know her.

I was just watching a show and the person on it said “How we keep people alive is by saying their names” (I imagine he’d include memories on this). It inspired me to think about my own mother’s story and how much of it maybe I don’t know. Maybe I could convince the ever stubborn Reni to write her story down, so that someday, I can remember her not only through photos or memories, but through her own words.

Retratos vivos de mama is  a living archive of love, loss, and memory, just like a scrapbook.  It reminded me that storytelling, whether digital or handwritten, is one of the most beautiful ways to keep someone alive in our hearts. 

Writers Are Not Strangers by Lynda Clark

Writers Are Not Strangers by Lynda Clark, and it’s one of those e’lit pieces that makes you realize how alive words can feel on a screen. I noticed that this isn’t a story you read passively but you interact with it. You click, hover, and sometimes just sit there, letting the text reveal itself in fragments. One moment you’re reading a line about memory or a fleeting thought, and the next, a new phrase pops up in an unexpected place, like the words themselves are alive and watching you.

overlapping text and sudden shifts in tone, between perceived humor, melancholy, and even a bit of playfulness, make it feel almost like wandering through someone else’s mind. As I followed Alix navigating her world, I could sense the weight of her mother dying, the pressures of family expectations, and the tug of her own creative ambitions. I found myself returning to a section where the text reflected on connection and distance between people, and it felt surprisingly intimate, almost like a conversation I wasn’t supposed to overhear but couldn’t stop listening to.  I really got that writer reader connection.

By the end, what stayed with me was Alix’s constant need for feedback, how every choice, every story she shares, seems to hinge on someone else’s judgment. It was uncomfortable at times, watching her balance the pull of her own ambitions against her mother’s needs and the weight of family expectations. I found myself relating to her tension, that push and pull between what you want for yourself and what others need from you. Writers Are Not Strangers is a great reminder that writing, like life, is a negotiation, and that intimacy and discomfort often go hand in hand.

Retratos Vivos de Mamá y Writers Are Not Strangers


Retratos Vivos de Mamá

Before discussing the work itself, I must say that when I read carolina lópez jiménez’s biography and saw she was Colombian, my excitement level grew rapidly. It’s really awesome to see such intricate and purposeful work by someone who shares the same sort of background as you, and has similar ancestral ties to a specific region. ¡Viva Colombia!

Okay, now onto the work itself. The first thing that caught my eye in the introductory section was the second page. Her statement of purpose, what it felt like, really brings the reader in. Because this is still a work-in-progress, it serves as a sort of time capsule. I really liked the comparison to Pedro Paramo, and how he went about finding information about his father—he had to go to a town filled with the ghosts of people to get closer than he ever was while alive. That is not what jiménez is doing here. She wants to connect to her mother through living facets, whether that be tangible artifacts like pictures, or even recordings of a voice. I think this is a beautiful distinction, as we place such an intense emphasis on someone no longer being with us. This change in perspective, seeing that we are truly the living artifact of this person’s existence because we can assign meaning to such photos or recordings, is quite consoling.

Staying with this idea, a few pages after that, jiménez dedicates a section to the qualities she has that her mother had. Whether it be her pronounced clavicles that resemble much of her mother’s, or un corazón abierto al mundo (such a beautiful sentiment), she continues to “carry the torch her mother lit on her chest”. This section ends with, “Es hora de dejarla descansar,” or, it is time to let her rest. This was truly a standout section for me and does a fantastic job of laying out the intentions behind this piece in a personal way.

I spent a great deal of time in el soplo combing through all of the documents. This was really special to me, too, as my family also keeps so many documents from past generations. On my mom’s side, we have documentation from when her great-grandparents immigrated to the United States from Italy via Ellis Island, to my father’s own naturalization documents from the early 2000s, and everything that could possibly be in between. I’m not sure what exactly it is about having all of this stuff. I can’t imagine never seeing these sorts of things because I think it has given me quite the idea of where my family came from, but it also produces this odd, sterile feeling that keeps memory locked in documentation. I’m not sure if this makes sense, but I will continue to think about this. I suppose this is why jiménez calls this section soplo, because it is a quick moment, a flash even, of who her mother was—everything included here only gives small insight into who she was… All of these documents do not account for other aspects mentioned throughout the work, like how she looked and what she was like.


Writers Are Not Strangers

Okay, I’m not entirely sure if we all start with the same excerpt or if the bag automatically mixes itself, but the first one gave me very much Kafka vibes, what with the slithering of the centipede and all. I will say that I didn’t know what really was going on, but the within the excerpt itself, I understood the story. I rated that a 6… a little more than halfway sensical. For the next story, I of course picked the choice that went along the lines of, “Y’know… but I’m really a writer.” I wouldn’t be surprised if the majority of the class picked this answer because we’re all writers! It made me laugh a little bit, this scenario, because I feel the question of, “so, what are you doing with that degree?” never ceases to come up when I discuss school with family. They just don’t get it! I’m a writer, naturally.

Okay, oddly enough, I also have an Aunt Serita. Well, Tia Sarita, but same difference really. And, one of my childhood cat’s names was Simon! Understandably freaky coincidences, but funny nonetheless. In any case, I really enjoyed the switch from choosing answers to just being told what is happening next, like “left the party” and “go inside”. I think that this is what makes it more akin to the literature we are used to than any of the other works we have looked at so far. This aspect being that we move from point A to point B without so much unknown. I also feel with these sorts of works, when you have to pick an answer that tailors your experience, I don’t like any of the choices. I felt that with this one a little bit. Though, I don’t know how this can be amended, as even in a hard-copy story, there’s only one way to go about things… so even LESS choices. I think this introduction of choice-based narrative has spoiled me a bit…

No way. I rated her writing??? She thinks there’s room for improvement, and that it wasn’t terrible. Honestly, I don’t feel so bad about my rating because I gave her a pretty good number, and it was honest. I would hope that if someone did that for me, they would be honest and not just say a number because of my feelings. Now, I’m really in this story. Moving onto the whole procrastination section, and doing random things before actually writing, I sincerely cannot relate to. I usually just sit down and make myself write. But, I do appreciate the sentiment and technique of storytelling here.

Okay so now, I don’t even know if what happened even happened in this fictional world. Because we know Alix was writing and we had to rate it, who’s to say that all of it wasn’t just some writing, and all of the doomsday proclivities were written, and the intricacies of Alix’s family weren’t just written? This was quite the uproot. Just when you think you know what’s going on, you really don’t.